Writing Challenge September 13, 2021 0

Brown Hair Description Challenge

The other day, my wife showed me a writing challenge she saw on Instagram. There are countless literary descriptions of blonde, red, and even black hair. But brown hair seems to often be passed over by writers. She requested I use a few of her photos as references and describe her hair. These are what I came up with.

Her hair poured from her hat in streams of coffee which splashed across her shoulders in search of a tall cup. “Pull up a chair,” it seemed to say, “and enjoy a conversation with a friendly face.”

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Photo taken by Holly Olson-Mosby – https://www.instagram.com/bunnyjeanphoto/
Styling and editing by Paige Shoemaker – https://www.instagram.com/paigeloe/
Photo by Paige Shoemaker – https://www.instagram.com/paigeloe/

The girl with hair like sand ripples at low tide stared into the middle distance. A journey awaited.

SJ Shoemaker

She readjusted her oversized coat. More a blanket than clothing. As she lifted her collar against the wind, her loose chocolate curls tucked underneath. Extra padding. Extra warmth.

SJ Shoemaker
Photo taken by Holly Olson-Mosby – https://www.instagram.com/bunnyjeanphoto/
Styling and editing by Paige Shoemaker – https://www.instagram.com/paigeloe/

Photo taken by Holly Olson-Mosby – https://www.instagram.com/bunnyjeanphoto/
Styling and editing by Paige Shoemaker – https://www.instagram.com/paigeloe/

Her hair was that of a mink. Dark and smooth, hinting of caramel in the shimmering sun.

SJ Shoemaker

This was a shorter post, but it was a blast to work on. Comment if you’d like to see more of these or you have a new writing challenge to propose.

About the author

SJ Shoemaker: SJ Shoemaker lives near the west coast in the Greater Portland area with his beautiful wife and rambunctious son. He is most fond of Mystery and Sci-Fi, a fact that is made apparent by his personal writing style. But he believes that a good story is not dependent on genre or medium so long as it is executed well.

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